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This student began high school with a strong interest in science and a goal of someday entering the medical field. They doubled up on science classes by sophomore year and took rigorous coursework in biology and chemistry, laying a solid foundation for any health-related major.
But what truly stood out wasn’t just the courses—it was the way they sought meaningful, hands-on learning opportunities. They were selected for a clinicals program at their school, which allowed them to observe medical professionals in a hospital setting. There, they didn’t just watch passively—they asked questions, kept detailed journals, and followed up with extra research.
This commitment extended beyond the classroom. The student built a mentoring relationship with a nurse they met during the program, eventually shadowing her outside of school hours. That nurse later became one of their most powerful recommenders—speaking not only to the student’s academic abilities, but also to their compassion and maturity.
Every summer, this student worked as a lifeguard. On the surface, it was a job that many high schoolers might take for flexible hours and steady pay. But this student saw it as something more.
They didn’t just clock in and out—they built relationships with the swimmers, started teaching swim lessons, and eventually became interested in drowning prevention. After researching national water safety statistics, they realized how widespread and preventable drowning-related injuries are—especially in under-resourced communities.
Motivated by this insight, they partnered with their school orchestra to organize a fundraiser benefiting a national drowning prevention nonprofit. It wasn’t a grand-scale campaign, but it was thoughtful, student-led, and rooted in personal experience—exactly the kind of initiative that UT values.
When it came time to apply, this student initially leaned toward biology—until a conversation with a teacher prompted them to think more broadly. What they really cared about wasn’t just science for science’s sake. It was how health affects communities. They wanted to explore disease prevention, education, and population-level wellness.
After researching majors on UT’s Wayfinder platform, they found a natural fit in public health. It aligned with their academic strengths, their service experiences, and their growing interest in health equity.
Their essays tied everything together, reflecting on how their summers at the pool shaped their perspective on safety, community, and prevention. It was personal, grounded, and forward-looking—qualities that admissions officers remember.
This student was admitted to UT Austin’s Public Health program, part of the College of Natural Sciences. They didn’t get there by attending a prestigious medical camp or stacking up hospital internships. They got there by being present in their own experiences, taking initiative, and telling their story with clarity and heart.
This case reminds us that the best applications aren’t always built in the classroom. They’re shaped in the moments when students connect what they’re doing now to the impact they want to have later—and are brave enough to tell that story.
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